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Where did my smile go? by ~goodgirlie:icongoodgirlie:



Where did my smile go?
The small curve that everyone loved
Where did my smile go?
The curve that lit nights

Did it fly away with the wind
Or did it get buried into sands?
Did Daddy long legs hide it in his web
Or did Green Keelback take it into his lands?

Where did my smile go?
The unique identity that I owned
Did it fall off while trekking
Or did the mountain ghost masticate it?

Did it get dissolved in acids
Or did it vaporise into gas?
Where did my smile go?
The smile I had, all while...
©2007-2009 ~goodgirlie
:icongoodgirlie:

Author's Comments

Sometimes its hard to smile.... something written during one of those times...

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:iconravenend:
"something written in those times"? - what times?

i like this poem, and the way you have related it to the things around you :)
The first stanza much entices me :)
you drive me to write now!

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:icontygergurl:
ooh nice, the wording is just great and it seemed kinda cheery to me, like a child wondering where their smile went. :clap:

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"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." ~Eleanor Roosevelt

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"I may disapprove of what you say but I will fight to the death for your right to say it" ~Voltaire
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Cooly, i was not expecting the tie into nature nicely done.

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:icongoodgirlie:
Nice to have driven you...... hoping to see some great outcome now, mate! =)

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:icongoodgirlie:
Oh thanks, it does sound a li'l innocent to me too! =)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai ~Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight *Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:icongoodgirlie:
Thank you! Living with nature these days, hence the tie.... the everlasting one! =)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai ~Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight *Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:icontygergurl:
great minds think alike! lol

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"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." ~Eleanor Roosevelt

:music: + :bookdiva:= :heart:

"I may disapprove of what you say but I will fight to the death for your right to say it" ~Voltaire
:iconflame-fist:
ahh ok.

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:iconrockonteddy:
Nature must love having you live with her .........
Great childlike words ......... keep :) ing Sujatha :) :) :) :) ........
Pete

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Its the journey that counts..... but make your own footprints!
On the way......... dance naked :strip: ........ for life is very short! :nod: .......... :) .............

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