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When the wind blows strong
When no one is along
When the target seems far
When heart and mind are at war

When trusted ones betray
When near ones are far away
When faith falters
When life alters

When commitements go for a toss
When life seems to be at a loss
When loved ones seem not true
When rainbow appears without any hue

Then...??
Take a deep breath and smile
Drink sprite and relax for a while!
©2006-2009 ~goodgirlie
:icongoodgirlie:

Author's Comments

Well...... was writing in a good flow...... but, did not know how to end.... seriously.... I did not know the solution....
I wrote something in the end... which turned out to be funny.... which was not intended as I was writing the poem initially.....

So, I would like you to suggest your Solution to this poem...

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:iconregeneratingzombies:
twists and turns
whispers and shouts
parts with nature
its eternal feature


may b u night wanna look at it

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as.kumar@yahoo.com
:icongoodgirlie:
Yes, I get the point.... took me some time to decode it...... but, it has a wonderful meaning within..... thanks for your time, yaar :nod:
=)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
*indians ~mumbai ~Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight ~Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:icondebaucherry:
this poems just like sprite... no bakwas :D
:icontygergurl:
lol, the ending is great; definitely made me laugh.

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"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." ~Eleanor Roosevelt

:music: + :bookdiva:= :heart:

"I may disapprove of what you say but I will fight to the death for your right to say it" ~Voltaire
:iconwritingkeepsmesane:
Your telling us to turn to alcohol?!?!?! 0.0

tsk tsk....

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If guns kill people, can I blame misspelled words on my pencil??
:iconcomparsian:
hehe...nice one. I'm still thinking over it:groucho:

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Expect The Unexpected!
:icongoodgirlie:
=) =) Think think.... thats something really nice to do. =)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai ~Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight =Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:iconcomparsian:
hehe:hug:

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Expect The Unexpected!

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