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The dark clouds hovering
The destiny most awaited
A serene lush green farmyard
Burnt ruthlessly into ashes

Backstabbing over and over again
To suck the goodwill from earth
Falls the attenuated warrior
Into the valley of filth and blood

A glimpse of romance
An illusion of existence
No love, no pain
A threat to eternal faith

Of lust and luxuries
Of desires and destiny
Of real and unreal
Of fake and genuine

The unexpected conspiracy
Awakening the power to rebel
To combat and to perish
To live and let die!!
©2009 ~goodgirlie
:icongoodgirlie:

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:iconstrangeillusion:
I really like this one, good work! :]
:icongoodgirlie:
Hey thanks! :)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai *Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight ~Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:icontygergurl:
awesome job my dear, nice to see you back here again!

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"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." ~Eleanor Roosevelt

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"I may disapprove of what you say but I will fight to the death for your right to say it" ~Voltaire
:iconsempiterna:
this is really good, especially the enboldened last stanza

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:icongoodgirlie:
Thanks tyger! Nice to see your comment back too! :)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai *Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight ~Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:icongoodgirlie:
Hey thanks, i am glad you like it.)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai *Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight ~Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:icondeepbaazigar:
Awesome...Mind blowing....Great work..Keep it up!!!

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:icongoodgirlie:
Hey thanks :)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai *Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight ~Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub

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