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Alone, with none by the side
Walking into the Neverland
Only the blowing breeze to abide
Exploring the unexplored Neverland

The path with ups and downs
Coconut trees on the way
For the heart to bounce
To keep beating, to find the way

As I travel the untravelled
Enjoying the bliss of nature
Its beauty leaves me marvelled
Gesturing me by its feature

The destination seems mysterious
May be sunshine or the dark
But the joy experienced during the journey
Is what keeps me going beyond the mark
©2006-2009 ~goodgirlie
:icongoodgirlie:

Author's Comments

Intimacy with nature.
Near far my coconut trees
Always by my side.
Bliss.

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:iconxetha:
the joy of the untouched innocent =)
really beautiful, hon.

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He is only a stranger, whom I have met before.
:icongoodgirlie:
Hey Xetha, glad that you liked it.... =)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai ~Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight *Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:iconxetha:
of course I loved it, I love all you poems, hon!

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He is only a stranger, whom I have met before.
:icongoodgirlie:
Thanks for your support.

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai ~Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight *Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:iconxetha:
:hug: your welcome, I'm sorry I'm so slow at reading and reviewing your poems, hon, but i got a lot going on right now.

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He is only a stranger, whom I have met before.
:icongoodgirlie:
Hey no problemo. You can take your time, at your own pace.=)

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I think everybody should get rich and famous and do everything they ever dreamed of so they can see that it's not the answer!
~indians ~mumbai ~Emotional-Writings ~PoetsoftheNight *Nature-Club
Founder of: ~PoetsClub
:iconxetha:
that's good to hear :hug:

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He is only a stranger, whom I have met before.
:iconkitanai-neko:
This feels a lot like a poem about self discovery... about going out on your own and finding independence while taking in everything around you. Nice job.
:iconrockonteddy:
Another gem from the master! :) ........ Beautiful, prima ......... It reminds me........

When I was a little boy my Mum used to take me to a place called "Never-never land" It was best to visit this place on a moonless night as the whole place was lit up by "Fairy Light!" So this we did.

I was a childs paradise. Set amongs the trees and bushes, on some gently sloping cliffs, sheltered as it was, but quite close to the sea, close enough to hear the water as it breathed in and out up and down the beach. Now "pixies, fairies and gnomes live hereabouts" said my Mum, and she was right! As you looked closely at the places that were lit up, these little people could be seen in their houses and gardens apearing to go about their daily chores ......... the whole place was so atmospheric and very real to a young boy with some imagination ......... wonderfull ......... Thanks for taking me back there.....
Pete
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:iconWorld-NatureClub:

Its the journey that counts..... but make your own footprints!
On the way......... dance naked :strip: ........ for life is very short! :nod: .......... :) .............

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