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Circle of friends by ~goodgirlie:icongoodgirlie:





Dreams seem so much real
Reality seems to be a dream
Almost two years gone by
It all feels like just yesterday

We owe each other our smiles
Walking together all these miles
Having made heaven out of hell
With limitations, we could happily dwell

Whenever we wanted to
Extend the time or relive moments,
Time never waited for us
We fought the war against time

Living with friends is a delight
Kicks all miseries out of sight
To study there was no time
All spent in fun and wine

I know not what I gained
All this while, two years time
I know for sure, I earned friends
Worth spending all the time

I earned all those memories
I shall cherish till my last breath
I earned all those moments
That complete my incompleteness...
©2008-2009 ~goodgirlie
:icongoodgirlie:

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sometimes, nothing else matters...

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:iconsempiterna:
Very good rhythm with this, nice use of full and partial rhyme

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:iconxetha:
as always you are able to convey your message with depth but still easy to understand. i like that you have kept on putting the last stanza in bold in each and one of your latest poems.

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He is only a stranger, whom I have met before.

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